Monday, May 3, 2010

Chapters 2-4

It was a very productive week, things are coming along nicely.

Chapters 2, 3, and, 4 are done!

I have some loose ends here and there. I'll address them in draft 2.

I'm about 20% progress, 80% to go.
Things look promising. However, I'm getting to the difficult stuff. I don't expect to write as much as I did last week.

One of the things I'm wondering about is the use of certain words.
I know middle grade kids use these words but, I'm hesitant, I don't know if they would be appropriate.

Here they are:
  - Butt (butt-naked spanking--bully punishment or butt burning scene).
  - Crap (holly crap expression).
  - Sissy (don't be a sissy).
  - Ansole (word game, rhymes with asshole, making fun of main character) .